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**__ Boat __**
Cold biting wind whips through the evergreen trees carrying the cries of wolves over the Mysterious Lake, Blinding white snow covers the earth like a thick white blanket against the grey sky, the Trees shiver underneath there thick green coats. Shivering ripples cross the lake like wrinkles on an old man, nothing lives in the lake due to the ice that forms over the top in winter. Mist swirls across the glassy surface of the loch creating an illusion of mystery and deception. The skeleton like remains of what used to be a boat drifts on top of the loch bumping gentily Aganst the side. Rusty nails stick out of the ribs and hold bits of wood on to form what Used to be the hull. Small icicles hang down from the ribs of the ghost ship. The snowy bank glows the same dull grey as the sky, Particles of frozen water sit on the bank ,soft and untouched as the wind lightly picks up the snow and blows it into the water. **My Assessed Poetry ** Term 2 2009

**__Shock__**

 * Shock is the son of Confusion and Truth. When he was 7 his brother, Uncertainty died in a fatal car crash. His Dad Confusion is crippled in his right knee. When Shock was 3 his parents broke up. He is married to Bad luck and has a son, Paranoid who is 4.Shock’s hair is always spiked up in to 4 long spikes and he has his eyes wide open. When Shock walks past you can hear him panting and puffing.**
 * Shock’s favorite colour is white because it is the color of his face. The color Shock hates the most is red because it hurts his eyes. Shock is a part time electrician and a loving farther but no matter how hard he tries he is still to achieve his life long goal, to become Calm. Sadly Shock is addicted to gambling and nearly always loses. Shocks birthday is on February 12th .**

 She cut though the waves like a knife cuts though a cake Faster than a speeding bullet The wind rushing past you like you’re a bird Arcade music blaring and the sound of excited children So many glittering key rings, good luck charms and shining sweets The boat rocks as it edges towards the harbor