Kara's+Poetic+Writing

The turquoise, motionless sea sits patiently, While throughout the calm ocean lays mossy, slimy rocks, Wet, stretching sea weed catches onto the slimy, slippery rocks and hangs on for its life, Washed up, lonely branches sit on the light, soft sand, So delicate and vulnerable, They lay there with-out love, excitement nor passion, While elevated trees watch over the whole beach, Bent and broken, Bold, solid mountains stretch like elastic in the far distance.
 * __Poetic writing__**

The only sound that could be heard is the light breeze, As it gently hugs the trees fingertips as it flows past, The smell of the salty mist lingers in the air, Sea weed Crumbles at its first gentle touch.


 * My Assessed Work**

**//__ Beauty __//** // Beauty is not noticed because she is beautiful on the outside she is noticed because of her inner beauty. // // Beauty is someone that when you look at her you can’t look away. Beauty always stands out from the crowd no matter how big that crowd might be. Beauty has a glisten of hope and love in her eyes. She is always the popular one because of her inner confidence and love. Beauty is always the leader because of her love for others, and her leadership and that is why so many people admire her. // // Beauty also has a great family; her sisters are Fame and Fashion and her mum and dads names are Love and Confidence. Beauty is like any normal girl, she has best friends and enemies. Beauties best friends are Pleasure and perfection. Pleasure and Perfection have been Beauties friends ever since they were little as they have always got along. Beauties enemies are Jealous and Anger. Jealous and Anger always try to put Pleasure, Perfection and Beauty down, but because their inner confidence the three best friends still stand strong and lets no one get in her way. // // Beauties qualities are: persist, perfection, motivation and encouragement. // // Beauty has always tried to help anyone who needed it so everyone will be nicer. She always succeeds because she never gives up. Beauty believes that anyone can do anything as long they stick to it long enough. She has great hopes for the future and she believes her dreams will come true but only if she works hard enough. Beauty is also a perfectionist just like her friends she will not hand in work unless it is done to the best of her ability. If something is not quite right Beauty will go and fix it. Beauty will never let any mistakes go. Beauty is always motivated and will always be up for anything that is thrown at her. You will never catch Beauty saying no to an opportunity as she is motivated to do absolutely anything. Beauty will keep going until everything is done well. Beauty will never let anyone say no to anything, she will encourage you to keep trying until you succeed. // // Beauty encourages everyone to give anything ago, to use every opportunity and follow your dreams. Beauty will always be there for anyone when they need it as she has inner beauty. // // **__Hope __** Hope is very inspiring person. She can always see the light at the other end tunnel even if no one else can. Hope is a motivated, creative, exciting person and can always find the bright side to anything. Hope dreams of becoming a Lawyer and she believes her dreams will come true if she works hard enough. Hope has an amazing family. Pleasure and Joy are Hope’s parents and Perfection is Hope’s sister. Hope’s family live very happily in a little cottage in the country. They have always lived there and continue to do so. They are a very happy family but are like any other family they argue from time to time. Hope’s best friend is Motivated. Hope and Motivated have, and always will get along. They have been best friends ever since they were little. They both share the same qualities too. The two best friends continue to inspire each other every day and that is why they have always been best friends. Hope’s qualities are; motivated, enthusiastic and hopeful. Hope will always be motivated and that comes with excitement too. Being motivated is harder than it seems but Hope always sticks to it and stays motivated. Hope will be up for anything that is thrown at her. She believes anything is worth a try. Enthusiastic is a very valuable quality and people will look up to you because of it. Hope is always enthusiastic about everything. Being enthusiastic is all about looking forward to each day as it comes. Everything seems interesting to Hope, every opportunity and every day. Being Hopeful is very important to Hope, so she has always tried to stay that way. Hope always tries to find the bright side to anything and succeeds to do so. Hope is a unique, exciting person and will always be up for anything. // **//__ Sorrow __//**  //Sorrow is someone who lingers with one who is unhappy. Untidy, dreamless and upset. Scared of what might happen when all goes wrong. Scared of change and being different. Sorrow is not one that will stand up and take ownership or leadership. Sorrow is shy, sad and hidden away. Sorrow lives her life wondering what might have happened but never knowing. // //Daughter of Depression and Miserable, sister of Sad and Loneliness. Sorrow and her family live just out of town in a pretty little house. This family have always lived here hidden away were no one will notice them, worried about what people might think about them and their lives. This family aren’t the happiest family or the most exciting. // //Sorrow is 17 years old, has just finished school and does not yet have any dreams. Too scared to decide on what she wants to become in case it will be the wrong decision and all will go wrong. Sorrow has neither confidence nor excitement. Sorrow would rather be by her self than with a crowd of people. // //Sorrow has no true friends and always feels sorry for herself. Sorrow has always wanted to find a friend but does not know how to make friends. She has no useful qualities because she will look at her disadvantages instead of her advantages. Sorrow doesn’t have hope, love, perseverance, or even confidence. // //Sorrow has lived a very unhappy life for some time now. She has never wanted anything bad enough to work hard for it. That may be why she has never done very well at anything. With no dreams, wishes or hopes Sorrow does not succeed in life. This may be as far as Sorrow will get in life until she learns to look at the bright side in things, learn from your mistakes, have dreams, decide on what you want your life to end up like and set long term goals. Will Sorrow ever learn how to succeed or how to make friends? Is this how Sorrow pictured her life to end up or was it far from this? // //Will this be the end of the road for Sorrow or is this just the start of a very long journey?

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